Pressured more and more under myself breaking the spine between overall composure and sanity. Losing grasp of the now Immense hate gathered within, I have given the choice between very few options... either find peace and quickly, corrupt someone,something completely or fall as a victim to self-sanity... It is clear that the last option does not cope with my personality therefore I have only 2 possible options and given the power of hate the second option seems rather sweet and vengeful. Then again if I do choose for the favour of the second option I will not get rid of the hate that much but it will balance evenly and add another layer for my psychological build up, in other words it will release a little but quickly find it's way back into my heart and even itself out adding an already huge surface area of hate as a base for more hate... The longer I wait the more and more I begin to snap and in this rate which I'm pressured it will happen very quickly... After realizing that this time of the year has got more to do with everything that I thought before, so the less I am bothered the better for the rest of your reality. Trolls however, may feast upon the negativity, why? Because it'll corrupt them over time.
Why are you trying so hard to sound deep and using twice the words necessary. Your thoughts do have potential, but your posts are overexaggerated and imprecise.
ReplyDeleteAgreed, it was over written, the short story has potential, but to put Iron Maiden's creation and legacy to shame with this that you write of, i find completely arrogant and full of yourself to tarnish Eddie's existance...
ReplyDelete~sincerely~ Thawthug @ youtube.com